1.tracy-jane-starscorner.blogspot.com - i give u a 8/10 becouse u posted your your plot very well with no spelling mistakes and good grammer
2.etjirovi.blogspot.com-i give u a 7/10 due to the fact that you arranged your plot summary in a perfect way .
3.diogosadventure.blogspot.com-i give 8/10 becouse you made the summary in the way it should be done.
Monday, 10 October 2011
Sunday, 9 October 2011
My first blogging experience
My first blog experience was amazing in the sense that I was still new at blogging this made me eager to learn new things about blogging and made me experience something different from what am normaly used to which is similar to blogging which is facebook or tweeter ,the first day was a bit clueless about but blogging made me find out about other people,groups and societies on the web .it gave a different way off expressing what I felt in a different way .blogging made me reach to other places .i normaly don’t reach on facebook or my other internet networking sites like email. I found blogging unique and different from them all because it was fun ,funky and it was cool and awesome for me as a student..expecially when i was posting through the tunnel which was a bit hard to do becouse i was not perfect at blogging still but as i began to blogg frequently i was now becoming a perfectionist at blogging but all in all my first blogging experience wasnt that bad becouse i was prepared to learn about blogging and be good at it profesionaly..inoder for it to be easier to blog frequently
Post 2-Silk scarf
The plot
The story starts off when a chauffeur driven Mercedes benz and a Mercedes benz in which two escorts enters the gates of oriental plaza in fordsburg,the chauffeur who where called escorts dressed in navy blue with flamboyant ties accompanied two women dressed in designer clothing and expensive jewellery ,the first lady was mrs Nebo, wife of an important official the second was Margaret who is mrs nebo's friend .the two ladies where on a shopping expedition at the plaza where the where shops,jewelers,harberdashers,outfitters,shops selling cutains,textiles,oriental garmets the two ladies bought some shoes ,then some jewelries ,swimming costumes mrs nebo bought a lovely indian dress now all she was looking for was a scarf to go with the dress after looking in almost every shop she finaly found a shop called moghul boutique selling the scarf that she was looking for but with this shop they only accepted cash only and not cheques that she normaly pays in .with mrs nebo being the women she is she wasn’t prepared to be limited with rules that did not make sense to her .this lack of understanding between the two mrs nebo and mr sakur stired up disagrements that caught a lot of attention particulary mr sader who was a shopkeeper and wasn’t prepared to start a war with a very big future public figure so he resolved the issue by buying the scarf for mrs nebo and gave it as a gift to her
The story starts off when a chauffeur driven Mercedes benz and a Mercedes benz in which two escorts enters the gates of oriental plaza in fordsburg,the chauffeur who where called escorts dressed in navy blue with flamboyant ties accompanied two women dressed in designer clothing and expensive jewellery ,the first lady was mrs Nebo, wife of an important official the second was Margaret who is mrs nebo's friend .the two ladies where on a shopping expedition at the plaza where the where shops,jewelers,harberdashers,outfitters,shops selling cutains,textiles,oriental garmets the two ladies bought some shoes ,then some jewelries ,swimming costumes mrs nebo bought a lovely indian dress now all she was looking for was a scarf to go with the dress after looking in almost every shop she finaly found a shop called moghul boutique selling the scarf that she was looking for but with this shop they only accepted cash only and not cheques that she normaly pays in .with mrs nebo being the women she is she wasn’t prepared to be limited with rules that did not make sense to her .this lack of understanding between the two mrs nebo and mr sakur stired up disagrements that caught a lot of attention particulary mr sader who was a shopkeeper and wasn’t prepared to start a war with a very big future public figure so he resolved the issue by buying the scarf for mrs nebo and gave it as a gift to her
The setting
The place where it al took place is in oriental plaza in Johannesburg in a shopping center and also in a shop called moghul boutique
The place where it al took place is in oriental plaza in Johannesburg in a shopping center and also in a shop called moghul boutique
Character
-Mrs nebo= Is the wife of clive Nebo she was of modern height,with smooth-skinned complexion
-Margaret=she the friend of mrs nebo, she is was slight with a lovely smile and teeth
-Clive Nebo=is the husband of mrs nebo who is going to be the foreign minister of the new government
-Mr sakur=a shopkeeper he is gount-looking and a very stubborn man who stands by his word
-Two escorts =bodygurds of mrs nebo who where dressed in navy blue suits and flamboyant ties and liked eating crisp chips
-Mr sader= he is a shopkeeper that bought a gift for mrs nebo which is the silk scarf to resolve the misunderstandings and disagrements between mrs nebo and mr sakur he is a very peaceful man
-Mrs nebo= Is the wife of clive Nebo she was of modern height,with smooth-skinned complexion
-Margaret=she the friend of mrs nebo, she is was slight with a lovely smile and teeth
-Clive Nebo=is the husband of mrs nebo who is going to be the foreign minister of the new government
-Mr sakur=a shopkeeper he is gount-looking and a very stubborn man who stands by his word
-Two escorts =bodygurds of mrs nebo who where dressed in navy blue suits and flamboyant ties and liked eating crisp chips
-Mr sader= he is a shopkeeper that bought a gift for mrs nebo which is the silk scarf to resolve the misunderstandings and disagrements between mrs nebo and mr sakur he is a very peaceful man
Sunday, 25 September 2011
Through the tunnel
The Plot:
The story begins on the first morning of the holiday with a young english boy named jerry with his mother on their way to the shore, jerry is usually always limited to playing on the safe beach but he always fantasiesd about swimming on the wild and rocky bay ,so when jerry's mom gives him a chance to do so he excitedly jumps to the oppotunity and goes to swimm on the rocky bay.
In the middle of the story jerry meets boys that are also fond of swimming like he is ,Together they become swimming pals .jerry met the boys on another coast ,they where burned smooth ,dark brown and speaking a language he did not understand they where big boys and adored jerry ,they competed on seeing who will last longer underwater and jerry was always trying to impress them.In the conclusion jerry tries even harder tobecome the ultimate swimmer to be the longest undrwater and at times jerry would practice to hold his breath for hours but felt week and dizzy aftewards or his eyes would bleed becouse of being exposed to too much water ,his mother often worries about him and even worned him to take it easy and not overdo it to much .at times him being in the water for long left him very pale but he ignored that and continued to push himself beyond his limits inorder to be longer underwater
Characters
Jerry: Is an english boy who at times is insecure and at times wants evrything at the same time he is a good swimmer and always wants to make his mother happy ,he is also a good sport and likes competing with the other big boys on who can stay undrwater for long
Mother:She is a widow, and jerry's mother she is at times possesive and to overprotective but she also wants to let jerry to be free and not with her al the time .she likes handbags .
Setting
Time :Starts of in the morning of the holiday
Place:the crowded beach and the wild and rocky bay with luminious movement of water with a warm sea ,irregular cold currents from the deep water.
The story begins on the first morning of the holiday with a young english boy named jerry with his mother on their way to the shore, jerry is usually always limited to playing on the safe beach but he always fantasiesd about swimming on the wild and rocky bay ,so when jerry's mom gives him a chance to do so he excitedly jumps to the oppotunity and goes to swimm on the rocky bay.
In the middle of the story jerry meets boys that are also fond of swimming like he is ,Together they become swimming pals .jerry met the boys on another coast ,they where burned smooth ,dark brown and speaking a language he did not understand they where big boys and adored jerry ,they competed on seeing who will last longer underwater and jerry was always trying to impress them.In the conclusion jerry tries even harder tobecome the ultimate swimmer to be the longest undrwater and at times jerry would practice to hold his breath for hours but felt week and dizzy aftewards or his eyes would bleed becouse of being exposed to too much water ,his mother often worries about him and even worned him to take it easy and not overdo it to much .at times him being in the water for long left him very pale but he ignored that and continued to push himself beyond his limits inorder to be longer underwater
Characters
Jerry: Is an english boy who at times is insecure and at times wants evrything at the same time he is a good swimmer and always wants to make his mother happy ,he is also a good sport and likes competing with the other big boys on who can stay undrwater for long
Mother:She is a widow, and jerry's mother she is at times possesive and to overprotective but she also wants to let jerry to be free and not with her al the time .she likes handbags .
Setting
Time :Starts of in the morning of the holiday
Place:the crowded beach and the wild and rocky bay with luminious movement of water with a warm sea ,irregular cold currents from the deep water.
Friday, 16 September 2011
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