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Monday, 10 October 2011
Sunday, 9 October 2011
My first blogging experience
My first blog experience was amazing in the sense that I was still new at blogging this made me eager to learn new things about blogging and made me experience something different from what am normaly used to which is similar to blogging which is facebook or tweeter ,the first day was a bit clueless about but blogging made me find out about other people,groups and societies on the web .it gave a different way off expressing what I felt in a different way .blogging made me reach to other places .i normaly don’t reach on facebook or my other internet networking sites like email. I found blogging unique and different from them all because it was fun ,funky and it was cool and awesome for me as a student..expecially when i was posting through the tunnel which was a bit hard to do becouse i was not perfect at blogging still but as i began to blogg frequently i was now becoming a perfectionist at blogging but all in all my first blogging experience wasnt that bad becouse i was prepared to learn about blogging and be good at it profesionaly..inoder for it to be easier to blog frequently
Post 2-Silk scarf
The plot
The story starts off when a chauffeur driven Mercedes benz and a Mercedes benz in which two escorts enters the gates of oriental plaza in fordsburg,the chauffeur who where called escorts dressed in navy blue with flamboyant ties accompanied two women dressed in designer clothing and expensive jewellery ,the first lady was mrs Nebo, wife of an important official the second was Margaret who is mrs nebo's friend .the two ladies where on a shopping expedition at the plaza where the where shops,jewelers,harberdashers,outfitters,shops selling cutains,textiles,oriental garmets the two ladies bought some shoes ,then some jewelries ,swimming costumes mrs nebo bought a lovely indian dress now all she was looking for was a scarf to go with the dress after looking in almost every shop she finaly found a shop called moghul boutique selling the scarf that she was looking for but with this shop they only accepted cash only and not cheques that she normaly pays in .with mrs nebo being the women she is she wasn’t prepared to be limited with rules that did not make sense to her .this lack of understanding between the two mrs nebo and mr sakur stired up disagrements that caught a lot of attention particulary mr sader who was a shopkeeper and wasn’t prepared to start a war with a very big future public figure so he resolved the issue by buying the scarf for mrs nebo and gave it as a gift to her
The story starts off when a chauffeur driven Mercedes benz and a Mercedes benz in which two escorts enters the gates of oriental plaza in fordsburg,the chauffeur who where called escorts dressed in navy blue with flamboyant ties accompanied two women dressed in designer clothing and expensive jewellery ,the first lady was mrs Nebo, wife of an important official the second was Margaret who is mrs nebo's friend .the two ladies where on a shopping expedition at the plaza where the where shops,jewelers,harberdashers,outfitters,shops selling cutains,textiles,oriental garmets the two ladies bought some shoes ,then some jewelries ,swimming costumes mrs nebo bought a lovely indian dress now all she was looking for was a scarf to go with the dress after looking in almost every shop she finaly found a shop called moghul boutique selling the scarf that she was looking for but with this shop they only accepted cash only and not cheques that she normaly pays in .with mrs nebo being the women she is she wasn’t prepared to be limited with rules that did not make sense to her .this lack of understanding between the two mrs nebo and mr sakur stired up disagrements that caught a lot of attention particulary mr sader who was a shopkeeper and wasn’t prepared to start a war with a very big future public figure so he resolved the issue by buying the scarf for mrs nebo and gave it as a gift to her
The setting
The place where it al took place is in oriental plaza in Johannesburg in a shopping center and also in a shop called moghul boutique
The place where it al took place is in oriental plaza in Johannesburg in a shopping center and also in a shop called moghul boutique
Character
-Mrs nebo= Is the wife of clive Nebo she was of modern height,with smooth-skinned complexion
-Margaret=she the friend of mrs nebo, she is was slight with a lovely smile and teeth
-Clive Nebo=is the husband of mrs nebo who is going to be the foreign minister of the new government
-Mr sakur=a shopkeeper he is gount-looking and a very stubborn man who stands by his word
-Two escorts =bodygurds of mrs nebo who where dressed in navy blue suits and flamboyant ties and liked eating crisp chips
-Mr sader= he is a shopkeeper that bought a gift for mrs nebo which is the silk scarf to resolve the misunderstandings and disagrements between mrs nebo and mr sakur he is a very peaceful man
-Mrs nebo= Is the wife of clive Nebo she was of modern height,with smooth-skinned complexion
-Margaret=she the friend of mrs nebo, she is was slight with a lovely smile and teeth
-Clive Nebo=is the husband of mrs nebo who is going to be the foreign minister of the new government
-Mr sakur=a shopkeeper he is gount-looking and a very stubborn man who stands by his word
-Two escorts =bodygurds of mrs nebo who where dressed in navy blue suits and flamboyant ties and liked eating crisp chips
-Mr sader= he is a shopkeeper that bought a gift for mrs nebo which is the silk scarf to resolve the misunderstandings and disagrements between mrs nebo and mr sakur he is a very peaceful man
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